Hello all and welcome to Mage Life.
This story is a work in progress as I said in the about page, its my first ever effort in writing.
I would be extremely interested in your first impressions.
A large part of the problem with any artistic endeavor is the inability to judge your own work objectively.
Here is where you can put your suggestions, thoughts, things that annoy you , you know all the things that are likely to make you drop a book in disgust, or leap in joy.
I can’t promise your comments will change the direction but I will take it all under advisement.
This is my attempt to open a dialogue.