The rewrite

As some of you may be aware, my earlier chapters are rough. So I have embarked on an early rewrite of chapter 1. The rest probably won’t be done until the end of the first book. It takes a long time. Far longer than I originally thought.

I would like to know your views on it. I will post it then link to the poll.

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3 thoughts on “The rewrite

  1. Pingback: Magelife Chapter 1 Rewrite | MageLife

  2. The rewrite’s wording works a bit better, and the description of what he did at the well was a lot more interesting, without being too detailed, for me at least.

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